Monday, May 10, 2010

commenting on previous years' PP

WINIE ANDREA'S
she made a novel and she had a really nice layout examples and also a very clear and neat explanations about what she's going to do and such. she also had her plan well managed. and from the picture (one/two of her book pages), we can really see that she has a very wide range of words that makes the book very interesting to read. 

BAGASKORO ADISUARDHANA'S
from his website, i know that he had a lot of research and work examples for his product. his final product is a poster that give people more awareness of pregnancy. he had a lot of his friends helping him to make the poster (for the picture part). he also made a survey so that he can know which of his work is best. i learn that we need to make our supervisor understand our plan so that we can be on the right track. another thing i learned is that in grade 10, there will be major projects, so we have to have a well time management. 

KUMARI NIHAL KAUR'S
for her personal project, she made a miniature theme park using a program in a computer. she had a lot of research notes and such and she had quite a lot of choices on what kind of things she wants to put in her miniature theme park. but, her latest blog post was on january 17, so i dont really know how it turns out. though i think her product went quite well because she got a lot of help from her senior and her supervisor seemed quite interested in her movie. 

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